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　　1、表达中式

　　The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation。
  

　　该句的表达过于中式化。

　　2、用词不当

　　学生们在新托福写作备考中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

　　In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U。
  S。 dollars as a prize。

　　problems应改为questions

　　3、成分多余

　　According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs。
  

　　该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
  

　　4、乱用大词

　　First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn't too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness。