一、生活中的问题作文评语？

1、文章语言通俗易懂，贴近生活实际，读来令人倍感亲切。

　　2、对于景色的描写，语言简练而准确，联想则为触景生情，情景自然融合。

　　3、大量采用生活中的口语，使文章更显自然亲切。

　　4、文章来源于生活，因此语言虽然不怎样优美，但却真实有趣，写得入情入理

　　5、文章清逸婉丽、流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣

　　6、以饱满的激情，描写了……

　　7、对人物的语言、神态、动作等，进行精心细腻的描绘，这是本文的一大特色。

　　8、文章将…写得细致入微

　　9、小作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序

　　10、文章边叙事边抒情。

　　11、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行。

　　12、叙述自然生动、结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。

　　13、语言活泼明快，富有情趣。

　　14、重点突出，详略得当，内容具体。

　　15、…以轻松愉快的语气，向我们娓娓道来，令人回味无穷。

　　16、细节描写颇具匠心。极富功底。

　　17、通过生动、形象的语言的描绘，使读者仿佛置身于梦境一般。

　　18、描写细腻，生活气息浓厚，遣词造句准确传神。

　　19、充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻、拟人等手法

　　20、通过丰富人物的语言和动作，衬托出人物的思想品质。

　　21、一些精妙词语的使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。

　　22、语言准确，鲜明、生动，内容极其丰富具体。

　　23、事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行符合各自身份特点。

　　24、文章想象合情合理。

　　25、比喻贴切，用词生动。

二、生活中的危险，英语作文？

IT'S very dangerous to cross the road without looking carefully first. and IT'S very harmful for your eyes to play games too long

三、初一上册英语假期作文40词？

How time flies! It's another holidayI have plans for this holidayI'll get up at eightThen play for another two hoursModerate exerciseIt's good for your health.

四、初一上册英语作文关于介绍自己房间的？

可以这样：My room is very easy. First of all ,my room have a bed ,a computer and ...... 可以用英文概述房间的家具，以及你对自己房间的感受，对自己学习的帮助等等。希望对你有用哦！！！

五、英语作文my dream school life初一上册？

what is your dream school?

my dream school is a place with superior facilities, beautiful and kind teachers, tall buildings with a large quantities of students inside.

在这里不光有高级的设施，漂亮而又友善的老师。高高的楼层和大量的学生。

六、初一上册第二单元60字英语作文？

Mrs Wang,the doctor

mrs wang is my neighbour.we live in the same block of flats.she is a doctor.she works in a hospital.her job is to make sick people better.to be a doctor is a noble job.she saves a lot of people's lifes.she always works with her workmates,some nurses.she must wear a uniform at work.she likes her job because it is very importnt and she enjoys working with all the people in the hospital.

七、初一英语上册第八单元作文怎么写？

dearbruce,

iamavolunteerinsavingtheenvironmentclubofmyschool.lastsaturday,ididsomevolunteerworkwithothervolunteers.

someofusputupposters.somehandedoutadvertisements.otherssweptthestreets.wealsohelpedcleanupthecityparks.whenwefinishedallthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.

ithinkit’sfantastictobeavolunteer.

whatdoyouthinkofvolunteering?pleasewritebacksoon

八、初一上册英语作文，服装店开张广告？

Advertisement Every body likes to be in style（时尚的）.Our store would like to help you.There are beautiful skirts in our store.They are in

九、写早上日常生活的英语作文初一？

I often get up at half past six in the morning.I have breakfast at seven.Then go to school at half past seven.I have no more time in the morning, so I often eat bread.

十、关于初一军训的校园生活英语作文？

We have just finished our military training.I have to admit that I have so much feelings to express!

This has been the first time for me to get in touch with my new school.No doubt it has left a good impression in my mind.I feel very happy to study here.During the training period,I had experienced a great hardship due to the hot weather and severe trainers.

With time passed by,I gradually adapted to everything and felt myself much more strong to the hardship we faced.Furthermore, there was a lot of fun during the training.

　　I has enjoyed a good relationship with my new classmates.Now that the training is over, I still have learned a lot . I can't wait any more to start my new life in high school.